I remember somewhere in a book called From Krakow to Krypton where Chris Claremont said that he couldn’t relate to black people that well but to the point where it does risk othering them a lot, especially black Africans like Storm that it does communicate a certain message or idea about them. It may not be done with contempt, but an element of othering is present on some level. To give you an idea, animal rights movements and the like other Easterners a lot, presuming them to hate dogs even when many or even most of them really don’t. It should be noted that ancient China did use dogs for rodent control, that both Indonesia and Vietnam still do this to the present day suggests some regard for and good use of dogs in a way westerners understand and recognise it as.
Like they’re seen as so different they may not register as human in any way, whether if it’s the othering of Africans in Claremont’s case, or the othering of Easterners among animal rights activists and their ilk. It kind of communicates a certain message that these people, though not always distrusted, aren’t seen as one of us (read: westerners) in any way. It kind of does explain why Storm tends to be fairly othered in a good number of X-Men stories, like she’s this exotic black woman who’s not like other black women to the point where she has naturally light hair and blue eyes. Chris Claremont isn’t just apparently disinterested in African cultures, let alone Kenyan culture at that, he’s also not that exposed to African and more specifically Kenyan media.
He’s never been to Kenya, let alone stay there for quite a while. As opposed to his holiday in Israel which greatly informed the way he wrote certain characters like Kate Pryde and Magneto, the latter whom he admitted he based off after Zionist terrorist Menachem Begin. It’s not much of a stretch to assume that he could’ve been inevitably exposed to Israeli media, given this was before the Internet came into being in the form we expect it to be. That Charles Xavier met him in Israel does tell you that his stay in that country had any real bearing on his body of work, over him never staying at all in Kenya. Since Claremont never had holiday in Kenya, he would’ve never been exposed to Kenyan media either. Actually even with the advent of the World Wide Web, I don’t think Claremont’s that interested in Kenya enough to bother perusing Kenyan media in any way.
So Claremont’s never this exposed to Kenyan media because he never was to begin with, along with his inability to relate to black people in general, could explain why Storm’s so divorced from blackness and more specifically Kenyanness. Storm often plays the part of the exotic black woman in the X-Men canon, despite the addition of Temper in some subsequent stories. She is the weather goddess as venerated in Kenya, despite the way that in reality in those years this country was on its way to becoming Christian majority. At this point it even has a substantial number of Christian radio stations (Family Radio, Hope FM, Truth FM and Radio Maria Kenya), because Kenya has this many practising Christians. Conversely speaking as Scotland’s now a deeply secular country, the way Rahne Sinclair’s written is painfully outdated in this regard.
It’s not hard to see how and why Storm has been portrayed in the X-Men stories not only reflects Chris Claremont’s own indifference to and disinterest in Kenya (not that he dislikes it, he never seemed that interested in it to begin with), but also influences how people would come to see Kenya and other African countries as. Unless if they bothered to expose themselves to African media a lot, which is what I ended up doing in a way. But I don’t think Chris Claremont’s that sincerely interested in African cultures enough to bother exposing himself to African media, even if it gives a better idea of how Africans see themselves as. I don’t think Chris Claremont’s this exposed to Kenyan media either in whatever permutation they appear in (newspapers, magazines, books, academia, social media and radio stations).
Even if this would’ve made Storm authentically Kenyan, despite getting some details wrong. Despite the Internet being a thing, it’s another to actually expose oneself to another culture in some way if/when travelling to another country is pretty pricey. It’s one thing to know about Kenya through western media, it’s another to know the same through its own media. This is something that a good number of anime fans have him beat in some odd way, in the sense that they bother to expose themselves to Japanese media enough to even bother knowing what’s going on in the Japanese animation industry. Some of them even have stayed in Japan for a time being really, giving them an advantage of knowing what Japanese fans are into and enjoy themselves.
Whilst it’s true that Kenya may not have been thus urbanised in the first half of the 20th century, but as of late it’s on its way to getting really urbanised and some African countries like Ghana are this urbanised. I feel if there’s ever a way to modernise Storm whilst taking these into consideration, they should make her a deeply traumatised resident from Kibera who greatly fears preachers because they want to exorcise her or something (I’m saying this as a Christian). Kibera being this slum in Nairobi, though it doesn’t sound as glamourous as making her the daughter of a princess. The idea that Kenya wasn’t that urbanised had some salience in the 1980s, but not so much in the 2020s where the way Storm’s written is painfully outdated by now. The way Storm’s portrayed in the X-Men stories is really out of touch with Kenya.
Not just at present but also in the past where she was initially written (mid 70s up to the 1980s), Kenya was on its way to getting urbanised. Nairobi was a thing in the 1980s, even if it didn’t take on the shape its citizens now know it to be. But even then people watched television and played video games in those days, something that’s never reflected much in the X-Men stories had Storm bothered going to back to Kenya at any point. I could be wrong about that but it’s telling how Africans and especially Kenyans are othered in the X-Men canon, made worse by that Chris Claremont didn’t find black people particularly relatable. No surprise why Storm got really weirded out by going to an American city, even though if she was portrayed realistically she would’ve expected black Americans to act like the Kenyans she knew.
This may not be true for other African countries but given how African Americans are so indistinguishable from black Africans that not only do they go undetected in African countries, they’re even expected to act like black Africans too. One would only wonder why there aren’t any stories involving Storm cooking quintessentially Kenyan dishes like ugali and sukuma wiki both for herself and her colleagues at the greater X-Men organisation (since it encompasses a detective agency, a school and a black ops group in addition to the main group itself), or more shockingly (to non-Kenyans) listen to country music. Though rock music does have a following in some African countries like Botswana and Kenya, country music is much more popular in most African countries.
There are African radio stations that play country music from time to time, it shouldn’t be surprising if Storm’s shown listening to this sort of sound because it would’ve been something she was exposed to growing up. This only reinforces my belief that Chris Claremont’s never this exposed to African media enough to know what Africans listen to, since I believe radio’s a good barometer of what people listen to if they don’t listen to music on their own accord. Though this would mean that Africans are in some regards very ordinary people, or for another matter Easterners (both West and East Asians). Ordinary in the sense that we have Africans watching television and listening to the radio, or East Asians caring for dogs and using them in ways westerners would see in themselves (but refuse to, due to racism).
It seems the way Storm’s portrayed in the X-Men stories kind of reflects how somebody like Chris Claremont doesn’t find black people and especially black Africans relatable, not that he dislikes black people, but it’s not just that he’s disinterested in black people he’s never particularly this exposed to nonwestern media as well. Even with the Internet, I don’t think he’s in the habit of perusing nonwestern media often. This could explain why his takes on nonwestern cultures and countries is pretty dodgy.